In politics the majority of the countries are ruled by men, and most of them don't care about the people but only about money and power. The 19th Amendment to the U.S. Constitution (passed by Congress June 4, 1919, and ratified on August 18, 1920) guaranteed women’s right to vote, which was a first step to correct an injustice. Almost 100 years have passed, but women are still rising by creating and participating in revolutionary movements, protesting against their discrimination.
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ReplyDeleteIn past times women were treated like inferior beings. When I say past times I’m referring to the 20th century and before, but even today they don’t have the same rights as men do. In the world of business, women have always been chosen after men because of their supposed lack of strength or intelligence. Nothing more wrong, women should be treated the same way men are and should have the same opportunities.
In politics the majority of the countries are ruled by men, and most of them don't care about the people but only about money and power. The 19th Amendment to the U.S. Constitution (passed by Congress June 4, 1919, and ratified on August 18, 1920) guaranteed women’s right to vote, which was a first step to correct an injustice. Almost 100 years have passed, but women are still rising by creating and participating in revolutionary movements, protesting against their discrimination.